INTRODUCTION- THESIS STATEMENT: We, people, all have dark sides that are sometimes can not be seen by others. In fact nobody really knows us. We have some good or bad traits that create our different sides from other people, make us unique. Here, there are three of my personal characteristics: I don't like cats and dogs, I am afraid of being in dark and closed places, I am very sensitive.
BODY PARAGRAPH#1:
Topic sentence: Sometimes, I can be very mad about those animals.
A. When I see a cat, I get goose bumps.
B. Having been chased by a dog in my childhood, whenever I come face to face with a dog or hear their bark, I begin to pray.
C. I immediately make an escape plan in my mind.
D. I don't understand how some people can live with those animals in their homes.
BODY PARAGRAPH#2:
Topic sentence: I am really afraid of being in dark places. Also, if that place doesn't have an open door, being there will absolutely be like a nightmare for me. If I am in a dark place:
A. I turn on the lights as soon as possible.
B. I open the door or call somebody.
C. I open a window to relief me.
D. I can't sleep in a completely dark place, so I turn on a night lamp.
E. I sing or wear my headphone and turn it up.
F. I never want to be the first person to enter a dark room.
BODY PARAGRAPH#3:
Topic sentence: I am very sensitive, and this is what I dislike most about me.
A. I always consider about what people say, what they mean.
B. I can find odd things to upset me.
C. I can cry for hours.
D. I eat and eat in those times:)
CONCLUSION: These are just a little of me of course:) Some of my friends already know them. I am sure, with some of you, we share these feelings.